Tuesday 21 May 2013

Peter Pan

I like the rhythmic quality of this. I've been writing things in threes recently and I don't know why. As you can see, this is structured so that every line contains three syllables. I may have the punctuation wrong which would lead some to read this in a way I didn't intend but honestly, I think the commas and full stops, as well as the line breaks let it flow without the reader having to think of composition too much.

Everything
that I think,
I create.

Everything
that I think,
I create,
I control.

Everything
that I think,
I create,
I control,
I destroy.

Not Captain
Hook, I'm the
first Lost Boy.

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